New lyrics: Go DJ (Remix) Pt.1

A remix of Go DJ by Lil' Wayne and Mannie Fresh. This lil' draft I've been workin' on for about half a week, 3-4 days. The layout is basically, whereever lil' wayne is talkin', I add my own words and rhymes. Feedback appreciated.

[Mannie Fresh talking]
Yea, yea, yea
Grown ups in between, children and babies
Right about now its yo boy, ya heard, back again
DJ Mannie
Fre Fresh Err Fresh
Fre Fresh Err Fresh
Fre Fresh Err Fresh
Fre Fresh Err Fresh

Go DJ, that's my DJ
Go DJ, that's my DJ
Go DJ, that's my DJ
Go DJ, yea
Wit K-A-G-E, step up to the mic dude do watcha do, ya heard

[Kage talking]
You know what equal people, I want ya'll to respect
I don't care about me I mean the DJ
So just be ready to press replay

[Hook]
Say go DJ, cuz that's my DJ
Say go DJ, cuz that's my DJ
Say go DJ, cuz that's my DJ
Say go DJ, cuz that's my cuz that's my

[Kage]
Man I got these lines
From mr. young carter
But he ain't under water
He 500 Degreez
But Gang Starr my steez
I'm the opposite of Young Buck
I ain' neva said please (*echoes*)
and man this shit insane
but man I luh this game
yet the people talk shit
cuz I ain' neva had a bitch
cuz I ain' neva lit a hit
but burned to a crisp
by these rhymes I spit
cool down with a splash
I'm here at cha door at last
Close the way to the past
I'm jumpin on the chance with an overalls n stash
With the blood red, words I neva' said
And the people I neva' lead
But enough about what i didn't
Man who the hell is you kiddin'

[Hook]
[Repeat X2]

[Kage]
I'm 'bout to run like a runnin' back
coach told me to watch the sack
but I said "Nah, I'm just to fast"
he said don't gimme that sass
and a laid his old ass
with a spray of bullets
the principal told me I shoulda neva' do it
but I just ran out the school
just yellin 'im too cool'
for this rap school
and yet I know Mr. West neva' graduated
and Mr. Curtis hated
all the dropout rates
but he ain't gettin good grades
as of late
but tell the common people
to lock up the gates
to this shitty radio state
but its to late
the garbage man is comming
but I just keep running
away from the truth
that this rap game's dying
Commitin' music suicide
Biggie & Marley told me not to let it slide
cuz the haters is all hunters
they won't let it slide
when its all by my side
the money and fame
a bitch ain't gonna change me i'ma be the same


[Kage talking]
Keep goin' I ain' got time to stop
And trust me, a bitch ain't worth it
So go, so go
This is the, this is the, this is the
This is the Real Life

[Hook X1]

[Kage]
Man I wanna make this a classic, last so long that they gon' call it jurassic
The flow of lines opposite of molasses, if you can't read go n' bye some glasses
take special ed readin' classes, cuz ya never know when ya might need it
to plant the grants of the future and the melt maps of the polar ice caps
all defrozen by this decision we've chose, to pollute the earth from our children's birth
watchin' rotten TV on the channels we surf, cartoons, tatoos, its all taboo
we all think it's coo', like checks on ya shoes, but whose really lookin' at who's who
have we become a hypocritical zoo crew, tellin' everybody don't worry 'bout nothin'
I'm sure Obama will fix sumthin', I'm sure McCain will stop all the pain
Of the American people, jumpin' over all the problems like an Olympic leap pole
But we've dug to deep in this economic deep hole rollin' all the debts instead of sayin' lets
try to fix the violence but all I hear is hypnotic silence from the political pirates and the red and white sirens


This, this, this, this, this, this, this, this, this, this, this, this, this
This is the K-G

[Hook X1]

Go DJ, DJ, DJ (*echo*)